Feature leads:
“I want to go there” 4 year old Liam Jessin said to his mom while watching a travel program on tv, in his hospital bed. Liam had been diagnosed with leukemia since he was 3 and has been stuck in a hospital bed for three years. "I couldnt tell him, he was too sick to travel" said Lydie (liam's mom) " so I promised him that we will travel everywhere, take a tour around the world."
direct quote:
"One day Liam, One day. We will travel everywhere, take a tour around the world."
I like your leads a lot, they are very emotional and pull the reader in!
ReplyDeletehaha love you! good job! :)
--Grace