Michael Scaccia is welcomed by whistles and applause. He starts playing his bass to the approval of the audience which reminds him so much of the chatter of enthusiastic students.
To Michael Scaccia, the roar of an audience and the roar of a classroom are one and the same.
~3MINUTEMAN
The second one is best because it instantly and cleanly draws parallels between Scaccia's two environments.
ReplyDeleteThe first lead seems to be channeling bad grammar. The Second has the most potintial, in my opnion.
ReplyDeleteThe third is plain creepy.
I feel that these leads really don't have enought content to pull someone in very well. I assume the third one was just as a joke right?
ReplyDeleteThe second one is the best. Please never use the words Scaccia and fetish in the same sentance again.
ReplyDelete-A fantastically disturbed Banquo